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Hi so guess what I'm multitasking as well as working on my story The Far Away Princess I am also working on a screenplay I want to produce myself called Blood Maffa here is the opening scene tell me what you think SCENE 1 EXT: Outside a pizzeria a man stands dressed in a camal hair jacket and leather cap turned backwords smoking a Captain Black cigar as he exhales we see a pair of fangs and see that he is clearly not human . CUT TO: A MAN STEPPING OUT OF THE RESTERAUNT APPROACHING HIM JOSEPH Is he here yet? MELKIHA Nope.Not yet CUT TO: A LIMO PULLING UP ON THE PIZZARIA. CU ON THE LIMO AS A MAN STEPS OUT ACCOMPANIED BY MUSCULAR MAN WITH TATOOS AS HE PASSES BY MELKIHA GLANCES AT HIM AND SNEARS. INT: SITTING AT A TABLLE IS THE MAFFIA LORD HIM SELF DON TONY. AS THE MAN WITH HIS BODY GUARD FOLLOWED BY JOSEPH AND MELKIHA. DON TONY (reaching out to shake his hand ) Ah you have arrived DON LUPO A pleasure now why am I here DON TONY Please sit eat . Don LUPO hesitates and sits down as he sits you can see the bulk of the gun and as he looks around he smiles noting that both the so called Don and his men are unarmed DON TONY Lets talk DON LUPO What can you do you aren't even armed DON TONY I don't believe in guns DON LUPO Then we have nothing to discuss Don LUPO draws his gun and his body guard stands and steps behind MELKIHA CU: ON DON TONY SMILING AND LOOKING MELKIHA'S WAY CUT TO MELKIHA SNATCHES DON LUPO'S BODY GUARDS GUN AND IMPALES HIM ON THE ANTLERS HANGING BEHINDD BODYGUARD Yaaarg! DON LUPO What....what are you DON TONY (smiling ) Your nightmare Don Tony grabs him and twist ripping of his head. DON TONY Well thst was intresting. Clean this up FADE TO: I/E: THE PIZZARIA -DAY Police cars are all around. Inside two detectives are looking at the scene DETECTIVE MARTY Isnt that? DETECTIVE SHULTZ Yup I believe so Don Lupos goon Terry the mook DETECTIVE MARTY And then thats ? Don Lupo DETECTIVE SHULTZ Who could do this DETECTIVD MARTY Don't know but we better find out or i have feeling this isn't the end Pretty cool eh thats all I have so far Oh and check out my friends blog I luv the rooms I wonder if there a guy room kinda like that www.youngchicandsocial.blogspot .com